This is my recount about the time I went to a beach and we had so much fun.
My time in the water recount
WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.
One day we went to a beach literally out of nowhere With my family. We all had jumped out of the call while my grandma was holding my babysitter and watching us swim.I didn’t have any swimming togs but my dad said I can just swim in my clothes.When I jumped in the water I felt a sting from my foot because I had cut it earlier on something and I was feeling very shaky but my dad gave me a log to hold onto so that I didn’t drown.
Once I holded the log I got very scared about drowning.My auntie came and helped and she made me to get all the way to the end.Then my dad came and told me to sit on a rock and I sat on it then he told me to hop of the rock and try to swim.I could swim but I was just to high for me to swim.When I got of the rock my dad told me to hold on to him in case I drowned in the water.I was screaming because it felt like I was so far from the otherside but I was only like 10 cm away from me.Then Once I held onto my dad I just started to scream my lungs out because That’s how scared I was.My dad was telling me to be quiet but I couldn’t even hear him and that was how loud I was.
Finally We ate some snacks and me and my aunt went to go out earlier so we could dry up quickly and when my dad and that came we went to go out and buy fish and chips we had so much fun and an exhausting time we were all thankful that god gave us a lovely day to swim I felt very tired and I will never forget that ever.